Friday, May 10, 2013

DON’T BID ME ADIEU





I have to leave
My dear love
My heart silently grieves
As I think of this

Years of togetherness
And now this separation
For lonely phase ahead
Can we have reparation?

Coming times will challenge
Us, and give us pain
Do not deter, keep in mind
There is no gain without pain

As moments of departure
Draws near; it is hard to bear,
And the lump in my throat
Melts tear by tear

I will be gone, but
For a while
You know our destiny has
Other plans, besides

I will be gone, but
Not for long
You will be in my heart
Forever smiling and strong

Distance can not
Weaken our bond
Time will only
Strengthen this chord!









36 comments:

  1. very emotional poem indeed...moreover the last para n d photo complements each other.superb n simple!!!

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    1. Thank you...it indeed is emotional.
      Glad that you liked it :)

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    1. Thanx Sasmit! Any improvements I need my critic?

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  3. Very moving and a poignant poem. The optimism behind it makes it unique.

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    1. The perspective of looking at things really matters, as that determines your attitude and the ability to cope with circumstances.
      Thank you!

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  4. That's very touching song of love...The ache of leaving and the hope for future blend together beautifully Kislaya.

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    1. Thank you Reshma! This blend is very important for balancing the elements of our life!

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  5. Pretty emotional eh? Beautifully written!

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  6. Touchy...really touchy.
    Loved the optimistic feeling in it. :)

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    1. Thanks Sourav.. I am happy I could convey what I wanted to! :)

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  7. Nice write packed with emotions.Painful parting words. "Shall the day of parting be the day of gathering? says Kahlil Gibran.

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    1. Yes that is a nice thought, let the day of parting be the day of gathering! :)

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  8. Very moving poem. Reminded me of some friends who had gone abroad on different assignments leaving behind their spouses.

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    1. Thank you Ramakant for dropping by and appreciating!
      And I do understand if it reminds you of friends..

      Pleasure having you on my blog! :)



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  9. I can so easily relate to it.....love is often the precursor to pain....and when one walks away leaving u stranded amidst memories, u can do nothing more than to wait and hope that the person chooses to return....for there is no element more painful than love, and there is nothing more healing than hope.

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  10. I agree with you completly Ritesh..
    But sometimes situations and circumstances demand so.. and there is no option to circumvent it!

    Thanks!!

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  11. i wont say how well have you written, instead of that i would say you wrote with heart ! which is in itself beautiful .. captivating and painful at the same time ...

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    1. Thanx Aziz for understanding what I wanted to convey in simple words from my heart!

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  12. Beautiful and painful lines. Ends on a loving note.
    The best line - "And the lump in my throat,
    melts tear by tear".

    Keep writing!!

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    1. I am glad that you found it Good.
      Thanx for appreciating and keep visiting!

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  13. Simplicity in your words is the beauty here. Keep writing!!

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    1. Thanx Shwets. Good to see you on my blog.
      Keep visiting!

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  14. ohh such deep thoughts, such deep meanings...loved it totally :)

    http://shrimaan-shrimati.blogspot.in/

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    1. Oh its great pleasure that you loved it!
      Welcome to my blog and keep visitin! :)

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  15. A very touching poetry which seems to have come directly from the heart! Liked it a lot!

    BTW: following ur lovely blog :)

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  16. Yes Bushra this poetry has come from my heart! Thanx for liking!

    Thanx for 'being my friend' by following DEW! :)

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  17. Nice and painful. You can feel the seperation

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    1. Yes it is!
      Thanx for the visit and keep visiting! :)

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  18. The words just hit the soul...very good dear :)

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  19. to emote while maintaining the rhyme is a difficult job to do. And you have done it beautifully....

    www.subzeroricha.blogspot.in

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    1. Ohh I feel so elated by this compliment of yours.!!
      Thank yo so much Richa :)
      Keep visiting!

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